Here's a little extra practice for your writing. Tell me what's wrong with the following sentence and correct it to the best of your ability. When you correct a sentence, post a new incorrect one for your fellow students to fix. Keep in mind that your sentence should have a clear problem that can be fixed using the writing techniques we have been discussing in class.
Here is the first sentence:
We wanted to go to the movies this weekend, but we didn't have a way to get their so we stayed home instead.
What's wrong? The first person to correct it can start things off with a new sentence.
Welcome to my blog! This blog will be used for educational purposes in my future classroom. It will allow my students to communicate with each other and with me about any questions or comments they have about their work or class. It will also allow me to post homework assignments and get students writing for a wider audience.
How was your school day?
Here's a funny comic from http://www.netzkobold.com/uploads/pictures/blog_school_day.jpg
Thursday, February 22, 2007
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